Tuesday, October 30, 2007

Maroon 5? More like Maroon Dive...

This has nothing to do with English class, but has anyone noticed that all of Maroon 5's songs sound the same? Or am I the only one that will admit to listening to Maroon 5? In their defense, they used to have some pretty BA songs.
Blogging is really hard to get into if you didn't grow up doing it when you were 15 to make it a habit.
I have a poetry question, sort of. More of a need for suggestions really.

The Third of July

Brisk morning air snaps of late September.
Betrayed by cooler wind, warm sunrays surrender.
Remember that Saturday I came to visit you?
My open car window let Autumn frost through.
That sunrise was amazing, so I never asked why.
Is there a reason it's as cold on the third of July?

I feel like the, Remember that Saturday line isn't that cool as well as others. Anyone have any suggestions or idea's for me?

2 comments:

Unknown said...

I just saw Maroon 5 in DC October 16!!!!!!!!! Check out my pictures here! We had third row for soundcheck and the concert, and at soundcheck we got a picture with the band!

http://picasaweb.google.com/Maydakfamily/Maroon5ConcertOct162007

Delicate Flame said...

you could just take out that first line and it's still a smooth read